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The stars and moon they move so fast
But where were you to share my past?
I feel it burning from below
Up to my chest, it's moving slow
You kick me once, you let me down
I find it hard to hide my frown
I want you here but want you to go
Confused and lonely on my own
Need the love but loathe the pain
To think of you I feel such shame
©2005-2009 ~Emo-xx
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Author's Comments

I don't know where the inspiration came from for this, just seemed to come shooting out of my pen
It's about a girl who's with a guy and he keeps hurting her, but she keeps going back to him because she loves him.
I haven't been through it myself but I know people who have, and it ain't pretty.

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oh wow Llynzi.. we know one of them people.. This is really good! I cant believe how awesome you are at this!! another amazing poem for my favs!

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O Divine Master Grant That I May Not So Much Seek To Be Consoled As To Console, To Be Understood As To Understand, To Be Loved As To Love - Sarah Mclachlan :heart:
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Lol thanks chicky bee

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your welcome sweet pea :D

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O Divine Master Grant That I May Not So Much Seek To Be Consoled As To Console, To Be Understood As To Understand, To Be Loved As To Love - Sarah Mclachlan :heart:
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:O OMG! THIS IS FUCKING AWSOME! i love the way u can just make it so beautiful!!! :O :hug:

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haha thanks sweetie. x

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Awesome work lynds, you know me in real life but im not going to tell you who i am :P hehe. Youll find out soon.

One again awesome work. :)

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June 8, 2005
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